Firefighter Connor (1.0.2)

Firefighter Connor is a linear short narrative visual novel inspired by the TV series “Weird City” (Ep1. “The One”). A ‘2 hour’ linear Visual Novel where you reluctantly sign up for marriage eligibility…and get assigned a buff Anthro firefighter dog as your partner. Contains 10 chapters and 22 CGs. As a visual novel, the scenes, vertical paintings, and CG are all very eye-catching. Especially the Q version of the emoticons, they are really cute, It can be seen that the author is carefully polishing the characters. Although limited by the amount of 4w text, the images of Geng Luo and Connor have indeed been established. In the first few chapters, Geng Luo gave me the impression of a carefree male college student, while Connor was a big sunny dog ​​with the feeling of “it must be cute if you bully him”. After six chapters, Geng Luo’s image has become richer, from being carefree on the outside. The art and music should be highly praised, especially Chapter 10, which is very expressive. Some areas that can be improved: Plot: The length is too short and the narrative pace is too fast. Moreover, on this basis, three contradictions, namely the relationship between Geng Luo and Connor, Connor’s old pain of losing his father, and Connor’s frustrations in his work as a firefighter, are used to jointly promote the development of the plot. which makes it difficult to present each part in detail and the main line is unclear. In terms of text: In the first chapter, there is no need to repeat the similar hobbies of the two people many times, just describe it; in the ninth chapter, the sublimation after the conversation between Geng Luo and Connor’s mother does not need to be written explicitly, this should be felt by the readers themselves.to finally apologizing for something he did wrong, to supporting each other later